From the Critique

On the critique of my concentration thus far I learned alot of intresting ideas I can apply to my project. It is because of these suggestions that I am going to improve the work in my concentration by:

1. changing the back ground or area in which I take the picture to create variety and allow the model to feel more comfortable when showcasing their insecurity.
2. try and photograph the model close up to magnify the insecurity and then as a diptec photograph them from normal distance to show the insignificance of the insecurity.
3. have the models write on a piece of paper what their insecurity is, and I can photoshop them in.
4. attempt to photograph in big groups, to make the insecurity seem more legitamate.